Origin+of+Name

nice i like ur script-lay Thx laynie and I hope I do a good job actually directing this play.

THE SCRIPT FOR ORIGIN OF NAME
 * Rise of Action

__Notes for Props__

__Swords(rulers)but needs to be decorated__

__Hats__

__Sailor uniforms__

__Telescope__ ||
 * __Dialogue__

F: Fiona Fay D: Dominique Bernal E: Eric Lee V: Victor Chiang(As narrator)
 * V: Victor Chiang(As French or British Captain)

E: Hi I’m Eric Lee and I’m a crew member F: I’m Admiral Arianna Hoffman and I’m the founder of the island. D: I’m a crew member named Dom and a good friend of Arianna.

V: October 8, 1948. Location, Pacific Ocean E: I think I see land! D: Is this another joke Er? Gimme that telescope. D: It really is land! Admiral, Admiral! I don’t believe what I’m seeing! F: (Stealing telescope from Dom’s hands and looking through it) It’s true! See for yourself Eric! E: I believe it is true! Wait, I see something else! ( looking hardly through the telescope)We’re dead! It is the British Navy! F: People, I’m afraid that we have war. V: They finally reach the land. Everybody except Victor: Land! ( Drop on knees and pretend to grab the floor like it is sand) Then Dominique turns around. D: I believe we have company! The picture of the battlefield pops up from the background Then everybody starts fighting. V: Six years later. D: Me too! The picture of the war disappears. V: Then they make a contract to share the land equally. V: After twenty peaceful years. || (“Moment”)
 * V: I give up
 * The Climax
 * The Climax

Notes ||
 * __Dialogue__

E: Not again! We have enemies! F: And they look strong! DE: It’s the French Navy! F: Get your weapons! We have war! Then the second battle picture appears on the background. V: After seventeen bloody years. Victor kicks Dominique in the shin(everything turns slow motion)
 * Ouch! What is wrong with you!

Then Eric Dom and Fiona kick Victor’s shin. He falls down and cries.(Slow mo) (Happy Ending) Notes ||
 * V: Please have mercy! ||
 * The Conclusion
 * The Conclusion
 * __Dialogue__

F: I feel sorry for him, shall we not kill him and make him work and live in the grape fields? Everybody says ‘Ya…’ like they feel sorry for him also.(Even Victor) E: Mam, I have a suggestion, maybe we can make him make wine since he’s from France and it is a grape field. F: I believe that is a very good suggestion.
 * V: I’d love to make wine! ||

This is my script for the play I'm making. I hope u guys like it.Andyman

REmember, no fighting with the british.-sunny

what r u talking about Sunny? I thought u said we have a war between the British and the French. Andyman

Yup that right. that no fighiting message was a bit old--it was before you bursted into the classroom like the world's on fire.-sun

Sorry sunny I didn't know that. Maybe you guys can give me more ideas and I know I'm barely adding anything on my specialist. It is because right now, we are rehearsing for our play. Andyman